Raided, hip-hop lyrics

[Smudge357]

This is a work in progress, I had the idea of telling the story of a dealer/grower getting raided in a hip-hop song from different perspectives, this is the cop's verse.

Another verse will be from the growers view, and the third could be from the buyers view, or the grower's family.

I blaze it up, blaze it out

Ill kick in your door and I'll raid your house

I'm taking every 8th and ounce, every scales I found

Me and the boys destroy toys in a blazing mound

You thought your mate was sound, turns out he had a gaping mouth

We need proof now that the truth is escaping out

We found him with a sack, yes and an 8th up-town

And just like that, your name came out

He shouts your address lane, like tourettes then

I sent my best men and your whole strains come out

Your raided now, my mates were 'bout,

Left ya feelings raped in an invaded house

With no care for feelings, we came up creeping,

Took all seedlings and any evidence of dealing

That where the crumbles land brother,

tell disgruntled grandmothers keep on weeping

Any input or criticisms welcome!

Edited August 2, 2011 by Smudge357

[thedogg]

good lyrics dude and never a truer wond said in jest