What's going on with that chick at the end of issue one in the shower with a plant. Plant doesn't look happy with that

What made playboy successful, apart from the really hot girls, was the quality of the content. What set it apart from all the other magazines which were sleezy and trashy was it's sophistication. Which was the clear objective the fella had in mind from the beginning. Hence the bunny with the dickie bow logo. Which emphasises this sophistication. Hefner also draws cartoons for playboy. Think he still does it today. So maybe you could find a good artist with interesting ideas to sort you out with a cartoon strip for each issue or something. I like girls too but for me there were to many pictures of girls and not enough quality bud stories like yours. You might be able to hold a competition or two every month where people can write stories for you and the winner gets published. Could be a good source of stories from anywhere in the world? There's loads of things you could do with a magazine like that. I think you set the tone with that article in issue one. That sort of encapsulates what I want to see. Well written stories, good photos of what is being talked about as well. The look of it all is good though. The aesthetics of it I guess. The magazine looks good to the eye. Love the ugorg ad too. The adds suit it. I also notice that the competition for some seeds asked how many strains ugorg stocked. Quite clever that because anyone who doesn't know and wants to enter will most likely check the website. So I thought that little trick was quite good. Ummm, another suggestion. Where you have double page spreads of girls. I think you should have one page with the girls and another with a different type of girls. Bud porn on one page, girl porn on the other. To be honest I skipped the girls after the first couple pages. Until that one with the girl in the shower, in which I checked out the plant and not the girl

The girls need work to be honest mate. They need better direction from whoever is taking those photos too. Growers girlfriend section

That last one was a joke, but may appeal to some. If you have any communication with the people doing the photos sort them a load of bud as props for the girls to play with during the photo shoot.

That's my feedback for now. That article kicks ass though man. Impressive piece of writing that is. Quality content is the key I think.