[outsmartemm]

Rake n, on 24 April 2012 - 12:59 PM, said:

I like where you put the clock
Have you got a gun,
Had sleep in my eye,

YO that picture is awesome I Am going to keep it thanks

[outsmartemm]

I say next eminem not in complete mention to skill
its more or less that I get high and just say whatever I like and it works
You haven't heard my other shit that was just a song I did that I liked
Cuz I thought it was fun

Frank Lopez, on 24 April 2012 - 02:08 PM, said:

Sorry dude, been listening to hip-hop rap for most my life, I used to be a producer too.

You have a bit of work to do before you can even mention Eminem, let alone claim to be better.

Just a reality check.

[distracted]

outsmartemm, on 24 April 2012 - 11:36 PM, said:

YO that picture is awesome I Am going to keep it thanks

no it's not! if you want your biog to be taken as real and not a lie then some guy PS'ing you having a smoke in your bedroom with recording studio style tiles wall stuck on the walls is not the way forward or worth keeping... if you have any hope of moving beyond that video, protect your image if you believe in yourself.... stuff like this whole thread has the potential to screw things up in the future, if as more likely you fail then equally this will persist on and on, just like the others you peppered over the internet

[M.M]

distracted, on 24 April 2012 - 11:54 PM, said:

outsmartemm, on 24 April 2012 - 11:36 PM, said:

YO that picture is awesome I Am going to keep it thanks

no it's not! if you want your biog to be taken as real and not a lie then some guy PS'ing you having a smoke in your bedroom with recording studio style tiles wall stuck on the walls is not the way forward or worth keeping... if you have any hope of moving beyond that video, protect your image if you believe in yourself.... stuff like this whole thread has the potential to screw things up in the future, if as more likely you fail then equally this will persist on and on, just like the others you peppered over the internet

Distracted, I am sorry you don't like my picture of the weed rapper,what's wrong with it,
I thought it was a good likening,
To be honest I found the rap it's self,to be a happy rap,and he looked like he was having a ball,
I was under the impressions the weed rapper is from the USA,and this kind of stuff is run of the mill,to them folk
No one knows what lies ahead of us,what twist and turns one has in ther life's,
I respect you,

[forest dog]

Rake, what are you rambling on about man ?

I thought your picture was blinding, I would have altered weed rappers t shirt logo and maybe have given him a mexican mustachio and a straw boater (thats a type of hat, tim told me about it) but other than that it was safe.

I respect you

[M.M]

outsmartemm, on 24 April 2012 - 11:38 PM, said:

I say next eminem not in complete mention to skill
its more or less that I get high and just say whatever I like and it works
You haven't heard my other shit that was just a song I did that I liked
Cuz I thought it was fun

Frank Lopez, on 24 April 2012 - 02:08 PM, said:

Sorry dude, been listening to hip-hop rap for most my life, I used to be a producer too.

You have a bit of work to do before you can even mention Eminem, let alone claim to be better.

Just a reality check.

Just listen to it again,very stoned and it sounded hypnotic,in parts I like this dude,
I don't know much about rap,I only know what I like,
SmartE,keep it up if it makes the sunshine in your life,

[distracted]

Rake n, on 25 April 2012 - 12:19 AM, said:

Distracted, I am sorry you don't like my picture of the weed rapper,what's wrong with it,
I thought it was a good likening,
To be honest I found the rap it's self,to be a happy rap,and he looked like he was having a ball,
I was under the impressions the weed rapper is from the USA,and this kind of stuff is run of the mill,to them folk
No one knows what lies ahead of us,what twist and turns one has in ther life's,
I respect you,

remove the idea from your mind that I in any way criticised your image, as an image, and re read what I wrote as advice to a young person bundling a pile of hope into recording his work and smattering it across multiple stoner sites hoping he will hit something, my advice is closer to your own statement

Quote

No one knows what lies ahead of us, what twist and turns one has in their life

no disrespect to you intended or inferred

[M.M]

I know where your coming from mate,you seem to me, as one of the positive souls around these parts
I never felt disrespect buy any thing you said,I was only showing my respect to you for the input you contribute to this forum
Peace and joy,

[kingbon]

I've gotta say,now I've read all the way through, I gotta appologise to you "Samrt E"

Dude when I listened to your song; I really did like the beat,the bassline and yeah you do have something very different to the game

I dunno what it is,but it's different, I wouldn't buy it though

It was another poster on this thread, think it was rake, he said something that made me think about it a bit more

Yes if you're enjoying yourself and happy then,dude, keep on!!

Listening to the tune again, I like the way you just sound happy with what you're doing so don't let anybody on this thread put you off what it is that makes you happy

But one important bit of advice you should take with you mate is this:

Make sure your head lets you take a step back and listen,really listen, to your track
Yes if you like it, try to think will other people like it? Take shit for your tunes man, if we don't like it,so what!!!

I hope something happens with you, when my girl listened to you she couldn't stop laughing and saying "WTF? is he for real?"

So just keep on man and make some tunes we could all enjoy or if not just enjoy yourself yeah?

Peace
King

[Plan C]

u clearly enjoy this but we would be doing you a diservice and lying to you if we said this was anything other than not bad for a young `un keep writing tho mate.

[Fat Charlie]

How did I miss this thread?

I read the replies before watching and TBH it wasn't as bad as I was expecting.

[Suspect]

outsmartemm, on 24 April 2012 - 01:13 AM, said:

Ive Got some new drug rap unlike anything you ever heard
I have been rapping for just over 2 years and been waiting to put out a demo
Check it out this is going to be big I am trying to get signed off youtube
I use to do alot of E and drink but now i mostly just smoke weed
I rap about smoking weed and drugs I call my self smart E
not because I think I am smart Its because I am the Next Eminem
Alot of peole say they are the next eminem but if you got the skill to be the next
you gotta heave the right name I call myself Smart E cuz I am or was a pill popper
as in M&M's and skittles the next eminem I got alot more songs than this one
I take rap to another level rapping about concepts among other things
My other songs have more skill to them but I liked this one and thought it would make a great demo
Because I quit drinking so I wrote the song Dont Give Me A Drink
Check it out you dont wanna miss this !!!!

+1 for entertainment value

-1,000,000 for total fail bars


Every human being is unique. Don't waste that by living your life impersonating someone else. Be yourself, be true to yourself.

[Monkey23]

i like it and i hate it too

[The Sinner]

Monkey23, on 10 June 2012 - 04:10 PM, said:

i like it and i hate it too

I love that smart e vid I found myself watching it twice this morning at 3am laughing my bollox off you've gotta love his determination and commitment .




TS

[Dangerous-Dave]

wtf

sorry but thats awful had to turn it off