[outsmartemm]

Ive Got some new drug rap unlike anything you ever heard
I have been rapping for just over 2 years and been waiting to put out a demo
Check it out this is going to be big I am trying to get signed off youtube
I use to do alot of E and drink but now i mostly just smoke weed
I rap about smoking weed and drugs I call my self smart E
not because I think I am smart Its because I am the Next Eminem
Alot of peole say they are the next eminem but if you got the skill to be the next
you gotta heave the right name I call myself Smart E cuz I am or was a pill popper
as in M&M's and skittles the next eminem I got alot more songs than this one
I take rap to another level rapping about concepts among other things
My other songs have more skill to them but I liked this one and thought it would make a great demo
Because I quit drinking so I wrote the song Dont Give Me A Drink
Check it out you dont wanna miss this !!!!

[HazyDaze]

[outsmartemm]

yeah my rap style is inspired by him
Cuz I just say whatever I want
Growing up that was the first artist I heard
But that isnt why thats my name its because the drugs
So I geuss you liked it ?

[forest dog]

It reminds me of the early work of Boney M, now they were some bad mo fos.

[HazyDaze]

I coulda wrote this one.. I never but....

[kingbon]

outsmartemm, on 24 April 2012 - 01:36 AM, said:

yeah my rap style is inspired by him
Cuz I just say whatever I want
Growing up that was the first artist I heard
But that isnt why thats my name its because the drugs
So I geuss you liked it ?

ok!!!, wasn't gonna coment,but, I just couldn't help it!

Right firstly my friend, do you know who you're showing that to?, this is the UK, Emenem has made his name here, I dunno if we need another one!

Ya name?, Smart E? na I don't think so, come on mate smart E? apart from the sweets, I really dont understand what's got to do wid 'Slim Shadey'?

Secondly, that tune's good but only for the beat, ya mind if I take it n use it for one of mine?

The words,the words...the words well I dunno!

Still trying to figure out what the hell you're all about and why we need to listen or even enjoy you?,hmmm perhaps when I'm completely pissed and stoned out of my head and trying to start something nasty maybe?

Some of it makes me chuckle,but that's all it is chuckling

But good effort there mate I mean ya never know ya could get real big

Oh yea what's that all about after the tune's finished?, my god oh my god dunno what message you're trying to send out there

Well if you're trying to be like Emenem then "hairy muff" but with Slim, he weren't just saying those things cos he could, it was also cos of the way his life was

You say you've quit the drink and pills, excellant my man!!

Do something possitive with that,ya know influence people and use Slims music as your drive or whatever
But I don't think you're gonna be the next Emenem cos there aint nobody like him...ever!!

Oh has he managed to call you up yet?

Still a good beat though shame bout the words

[Lobo]

So your real name is Dave Newman? Careful about that.

Nice effort Dave

[Saddam]

Please Kill me!!!

[StevieRays]

Sorry mate but that was fucking shit, not even as good as ems new stuff When someone says they are the next em it kinda sets expectations high.

[datadude]

Sorry mate, but i think you should treat this as a hobby , no more.

My advice, stop comparing yourself to Eminem, your nothing like him, sound nothing like him, just be yourself, find your own flow and style.

Slim shady sucks in my opinion, the white face of a black world.
I remember seeing a clip of one of his live shows, I would guess 80% of the audience were white teenage girls.

I always thought there were so many better artists out there that deserved the attention he got.

carry on doing your thing dude, just don't expect to get anywhere with it.

sorry if I seem a little hard on you, I've always had a problem listening to British white rappers, it just doesn't work for me.

data.

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This post has been edited by datadude: 24 April 2012 - 06:20 AM

[redtilidie]

The beat is not bad but i hate that eminem style of rapping,as it's more talking than rapping.

Give me a big B-line and a flow like ,Biggie,Gangstarr,etc and i'll ;listen to it all day

[Greengrocer]

frickin wannabies... I'm not investing in yer..!